First Chapter Of One little Family of Mice

My momma encouraged me to write a story and put it on my blog. It's going to be in chapters on my blog. It's a children's book!
One little Family of Mice
By: Madeline Grace
Chapter one
Once upon a time a family of mice lived under a pine tree in a great pine forest. On this particular day mother mouse was very busy!

Father mouse and all the boys were outside, very busy moving pine cones this way and that to get ready for something big.

All the girls were out shopping in the Great Pine store, for different sweets and candies for the something big!

All their friends were getting ready too. Like the fox family, the squirrel family, and the chipmunk household.
And I cannot forget to mention the ages and names of these cute little mice! Oswald, sixteen, is the oldest, Sierra, the second oldest, is fourteen, Adam and Ruby the twins are six the two third oldests, and one more set of twins Jacob and Elijah are the youngests and are four. The Mother and Father are each forty.
That concludes chapter one. Stay tuned for the second chapter.
~Maddy~